Hi Sharon,
Thank you for taking the time to look and comment. You are absolutely right about the eye on the right, I was playing with it because the fingers are surrounding the eye cavity, but of course it is too strong.
About the composition: I said in my text, it is just playing with pencils on paper so I really don't mind about composition rules or whatever rule. I do not plan to show these sketches anywhere else but here.
Oh, and Schiele is the artist I admire the most since I was a student. Did you ever see the book "Egon Schiele, The Complete Works" edited by Thames and Hudson? There are 3275 illustrations in it and it is right here on my bookshelf.
Admin note: you can find the book here: http://www.amazon.com/exec/obidos/ex...&Search=Search