[Karin Wells]

You're close but no cigar.

Bite the bullet, lose the reflected light and the glasses and eyes.

Hat brim: top right and wherever you can on the left - lose the edges. Don't outline at this stage.

Hat band: Lose the highlight.

Where the light meets the shadow on the left side of the face (as I view it) is way off. You need a LOT more work on the transition between light and shadow. i.e., the chin structure and the shadow from the eyeglasses is not correct. Even though the object is to lose the "details" the goal is to achieve a "dead on" likeness at this stage.

Jacket. Think form. Define true shadow from halftone. i.e., take another look at the collar. Make your light flat - even though you do not see it this way. Make your shadow flat. Make the transistion between the two extrememly accurate.

Successfull underpainting is in the accurate depiction of the transition between light and shadow.

Light can transition quickly into shadow.

And light can transition slowly into shadow.

And the quality with which you depict this transition is the foundation of your entire painting. Mastering a halftone can elevate you into the "pro" category and is worth the effort.