Nice portrait. Check the ear, the orifice seems a little large and too far to the bottom of the ear. There also seems to an indefinite line coming into the orifice from the top.
Your painting would also look better with the line at the back of the head being softer.
Put some ambient light colors in the shadow side of the face.
I very much like the lighted side of your portrait.
Daniel
PS Happy new year.
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