Hi Mike,
I think you're doing such a fantastic job with all your portraits. You have a lot of guts.
I've been through an entire art program and I am not as prolific as you are. I really just want to applaud you for your spirit! It's a wonderful thing; you truly are inspiring!
Okay, so about the photo, I like the pose of #2 but the lighting of #1. I Have recently read about portraits of people who are more mature... that lighting from the front is most flattering. hope that helps. I'm sure the pros will give better info!
Best of Luck!
Sincerely,
Carolyn