My first thoughts as it began to open were, "Quite detailed! She is older than Yoda!"
I am not an expert in pencil work that is as detailed as this. It seems that when people detail pencil this much, it tends to get stiff looking. It is rather hard to prevent. There needs to be more thought to style and expression. I cannot say exactly how it can be achieved.
The light on the viewer's left cheek tends to break in a straight line, which is uncharateristic.
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