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Josef Sy 06-14-2007 09:48 PM

figure study
 
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This is a study I did last year of a model named Karl. He is a dancer and he was stretching at that time.
Oil on Canvas, 10 x 12.

Lisa Gloria 06-15-2007 07:21 PM

Hi Josef! This is really cool. You can really feel the tension in his pose.

I think when doing small paintings like this one, the value composition is very important so you can draw people in from across the room. Right now those two dark slivers on either side are the only thing that would stick out from a far distance. Maybe think about the background or pants?

Josef Sy 06-16-2007 11:00 PM

Hi Gloria. You are totally right. I wil try to do something about that. Thanks. I really appreciate the feedback!

Karine Monaco 06-22-2007 05:53 PM

I love it.
Congratulations!

Karine

Garth Herrick 06-23-2007 10:40 AM

I love this Josef!

It's so deftly rendered, and a great seed of an idea for a derivative work. I am inspired by ithis.

Garth


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